Comments:
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Elisabeth Janerka:
Two things
1. Why doesn't the guy in the chair have eyes??
2. The composition could be improved a lot. I didn't even notice the character on the right at first, because he is so far out to the side. I would lower the camera (it is a bit weird that we are looking down on them like this), and then rotate is so we get both characters more centered in frame. Finally I would move the character (to the right) closer to the character sitting in the chair
Joshua Kaberline:
Nice job!
Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto:
Good animation, could use some more energy and personality to the characters.
Animator: Warrick Chung
Description: 2 people talk reflect on their pasts
Experience: Beginner
Time taken: 3-4 days