Robert Cartwright:

I love the chill atmosphere of the scene you created! I haven't seen the actual scene but I imagine it would be in a setting kind of like this. You nailed the intonation of the voices in the body poses superbly! great work!

Elisabeth Janerka:

Very strange framing where it is hard to see the characters' faces and therefore also hard to determine who's talking in the beginning

Nathaniel Vaughan:

Not a lot of movement. The camera shot's a little far from the character's faces, so I can't get a good sense of how they feel.

Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto:

Seems decent, but still needs a lot more inbetweens and holds for each pose.