Robert Cartwright:

This looks like it could have actually come out of a kids cartoon! Well done! My only critique is that when the monster springs out of the small pumpkin, the witch character doesn't really react in surprise, which is what I would have done, so it makes the ending of the scene feel a little off. Maybe make him jump back in awe or something along those lines. Great work!

Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto:

The talking pumpkin needs some improvement on the facial expressions (looks like they're smiling despite the line and context) and the camera angle doesn't help the witch's lipsync.