Robert Cartwright:

I love the facial expressions, they're very on point! The only thing I'd say is that the model on the left jerks in and out a lot at the very beginning, causing his chest to break through his shirt. I'd try to fix the jerking motion, as in such a dark scene I can't see what he's doing anyway. Great work!

Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto:

The idea is good, and the animation is ok for a start, but it needs more polishing and better speed, particularly the arms. There's also a bit where the skin of the person on the left is clipping through the shirt.