Alone in the dark
by Jonathan Fontaine, October Competition Winner!
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the lighting, animation and mood is great overall.I like when she spin to see the door closed. It is smooth and feels natural. the only critique i have is you should improve the story more.
amazing! could work on the mouth a bit though
The intensity of the light at it's most intense point is a little too intense I think
The motion of this is amazing!
...Wow...This is soooo good! Everything incredibly polished. I think this one's the winner this month.
Damian Lancaster James:
Nice. but aside from the awesome turnaround, there's not much creativity going on.
Aaron James Mongcopa:
Overall, nice shot. But the end turn could be sped up a bit.
Nice! but if siren lights were somehow integrated in this scene, that would've made this spectacular.
can you be my Senpai
excellent. definitely will be top 2.
That's a hell of a job done! Looks amazing!
The flame feels very bright and warm!
Very nice work
Very impressive - especially the turnaround!
This is the winner for me. I love how natural and understated the movement is. Well done
Animator: Jonathan Fontaine
Description: Gina Delatour is investigating a strange facility
Experience: Learning traditionnal animation for a year and a half
Time taken: over 15 days