ro crown:

6 stars , due to the earnst of the actions of the char's....love the shortcuts of the body parts...but is unfinished look that prevents me from a higher vote......anyways i and others do look forward to more entries from you!!!!!!

Jay Gluckman:

Nice study of the blocking and basic movements

Izzy Patchett:

I think the first thing to tackle here would be setting up a good perspective grid - the desks and the characters seem to be at different angles, so the characters seem to be placed on top of a background, rather than feeling like part of a cohesive scene.