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Alfred shoots his shot

by Ryan Everhart

Final Rating: 3.75. Finished 66 out of 82 entries.

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Animator: Ryan Everhart

Description: Alfred is practicing what he'll say to Luna later, but his chance comes sooner than expected

Alfred Rig:

Luna Rig:

Environment (modified):

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: Two weeks


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Richard Adams:

There is a lot of "popping" in his body mechanics. Look in the graph editor to smooth out the discontinuities.

Tom Islava:

The poses could be strengthened more. Plus I'm seeing a lot of twinning and some of the tangents still need to be tweaked.

Ben Zingo:

the movement seems somewhat jittery and pose-to-pose. You might want to try slowing things down a little, and add in some anticipation, overshoot, etc