Tom Islava:

My only advice is to finish the lipsync. Other than that, it's all good.

Ben Zingo:

the body and shoulders seem very animated, but the neck and head feel oddly stiff and trained on a single point. The lipsync/mouth shapes could also use some work, but overall the acting feels nice

Gemma:

Good use of body language, but the lip-syncing needs a bit of work and the face needs to be a bit more expressive to match his body language. We also can't see who the man is talking to. If you're achieving an over-the-shoulder look, you would need to have the girl in frame and off to the side a little. How does she react to this?