Jay G. :

I love the words and pictographics to emphasize the dialog

Sean O Boyle:

actions need to be exagerated away from the body alot more, movement should be arced (assuming beginner, this is when things move in curved lines) more too

DarrenT:

I really like the idea of showing the text on screen. That's quite unique in this challenge.
However, as a character animation competition, I'd like to see more movement of the characters themselves. I see you've used copy/paste & selective editing to add movement. Redrawing often looks better.
But this is a great start. Keep at it.