Hadrien Kobylarz:

Nice storytelling ! Some movements seem very extreme and need more anticipation/easing.

Ben Zingo:

the framing and poses are really nice, I feel like with some polish, this could be really good! Building up moments of anticipation, overshoot, etc. could really help with the moves. It seems like you're over-acting during the "not batman, but like..." section. We don't need a visualization of every key word!

Maria:

Lovely, fun setting and a nice pay off! I like the very first reaction of the startled panic against the door. Very fun!