Comments:
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Ben Zingo:
It's really hard to tell what's going on when you have 3? characters that are all center-screen staring at camera, and fast cuts. Think about where the characters are in the scene, where they are looking, how they are reacting to each other
Richard Adams:
The arms, frames 76-84, is off-model and needs work. The rest of this is reasonably decent. I actually think this is one of the better 2D entries I've seen this month.
bozza:
mans eye was wonky fix it next time
im removing 1 star away for his wonky eye
im giving 1 point for the solid animation and a whopping 9 points for the beautiful art
Animator: Siena Beardmore
Description: A group of very normal kids trick or treating when one of them declares to have seen something…quite odd. Is one of them hiding a secret!!
Experience: 1 year and a half
Time taken: 6 days