Divina Gracia:

Need more anim fundamentals

Joshua:

One of the biggest problems I have with this is that the characters don't fit the voices. It just kills any sense of immersion that Animation is supposed to give. But I won't hold that against you as rigs for 'appropriate' characters for the voices can be lacking or expensive.

But the basic movements are there, just needs some good polishing.

And the expressions on the kid are good. Maybe a little too much body movement in some areas. But the look the kid gives at the end is very well done.

Kfir Ben-Dov:

Poses are cool, I'm not quite sure the characters matches their voice

Richard Adams:

A boy and a woman both with adult male voices? Characters need to fit the voices.