Comments:
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Joshua:
Really need to clean up those lines, it was hard on the eyes.
Aaron James Mongcopa:
Great camera subtle movements. I like the animation, it works! I can feel the intensity of their conversation.
Sean O Boyle:
Fantastic rough!!
Julian Dill:
Around the second half, the faces kind of lose any emotion.
Jad El-Khoury:
very nice, could use more holds on strong poses
Maria:
Lovely detailed characterizations and clean, clean work.
Richard Adams:
The 3-dimensional feel of this is incredible. Weak point of this is the lip syncing. Work on improving the mouth shapes to better match the dialogue.
Susannah N.:
This is really good! Awesome job! The only thing I can think of to improve is the movements with the second character seem a bit too quick at first
DarrenT:
This looks rotoscoped, which doesn't really fit with the idea of the competition. It's very well done, but not animated.
Animator: Alen Burazerovic
Description: Not finished, thanks for watching.
Experience: 9
Time taken: Couple of days, after work.