Comments:
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Jessica Graves:
Good start. I like the idea.
Julian Dill:
You haven't added the lip-sync yet, and I think you need to clean up some of the curves in the graph-editor.
Kfir Ben-Dov:
The primary poses and layout are cool. I like the composition. It just needs smoothing out in the arcs, and the body parts. Take care of the spacing problems and tighten up the lipsync
Liam Smith:
You could focus the camera on each character when they're talking cause It's hard to see their expressions
Anaïs Ledoux:
I like the small head movements! Would look great with lipsync.
Jay G. :
Nice believable postures of the characters
Animator: Pooja Kolekar
Description: After office hours, senior cop and intern discussing about batman's whereabouts.
Experience: Student- learning animation, first attempt at two person dialogue shot.
Time taken: 9 days