Joshua:

Good work, but general body movement is a little sharp and sudden, need to smooth out the movements more.

Jessica Graves:

I like the staging. I think if you pull your camera a little closer in both shots, we'd get a better view of the facial acting. Nice work!

Kfir Ben-Dov:

Looks cool, movements are too sharp though.

Mateus Di Mambro:

well done!