Comments:
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Ben Zingo:
think about acting and how these characters are interacting and communicating with each other. Act it out yourself! Film reference! You don't have to literally spell out/point to visuals of key words
Liam Smith:
You could zoom in the camera to the characters
Jay G. :
I enjoyed it. Keep working on it.
DarrenT:
Great start. The characters both feel a little stiff.
Great ideas for the story. I look forward to seeing your next entry.
Animator: Thomas Paxton
Description: This is a basic animation, made using the Norman models.
Experience: In college. I don't animate as much as i should, so not that much.
Time taken: About 4 weeks