Comments:
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Joshua:
Good effort, but the movements are a little jumpy.
Jaw and lip movements can use some work. Some parts are lacking movement and expression others have too much movement and expression.
But you at least have the basics down, it's a matter of getting the movements to blend together so they're not as jumpy, and getting the mouth movements to be better.
Sean O Boyle:
Great animation, could've done with wider/more outward posing
Animator: Juliette Bigo
Description: A speleologist finds his wounded associate in the cave they were exploring, but he seems to be more interested in the attacker’s appearance than in his friend’s wellbeing.
Experience: One year as a student
Time taken: A mounth