Connor Brown:

Love the concept and the scene. A little more work on the lip sync and easing in on some of the poses will really take this to the next level. Awesome work!

Christof:

Sync seems a little off, but I like the first shot a lot, tons of appeal in her actng. Screen direction is a little confusing as far where the character is looking in the first shot. What if she was upside down at first but in a closeup so we don't see the ropes, and just wonder why she's upside down. Then in the reveal we see the ropes and barrels

Yi:

Excellent !!!

Andrew Stewart:

Hang the blonder girl's hair down ton show gravity

Joaquin:

I think a cut could've been more effective than a zoom out. It felt too sudden for the mood