Comments:
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Joseph Rodriguez:
you've got really good pose work for sure, but I think overall it's a bit too exaggerated for what the audio is offering, I would prefer something a bit more tone down. definitely a stylistic choice, but not my personal preference. that being said, it's extremely well done! great job!!!
Ana Beatriz:
I enjoyed the acting but in my opinion the hitting on the table didn't match the tone of the voice
lemmy:
This work hurts me especially because the animation is so beautiful but so disconnected from the sound and it's such a shame, the sound shows a much more sensitive and delicate situation than the storm of emotions in this scene, it's a shame
Monet DeClouette:
I believe the timing is decent! I think the characters suffer from a little bit of overacting particularly in the woman's face. It doesn't quite match the line delivery and feels a bit floaty at frames 101-114.
Jennifer Croom:
I love that you're not afraid to make them really move, but some of these are a bit extreme! Toning it down would make the acting better.
Mau Morris:
0-45: I really like the approach to the starting breath as an expression of frustration. I kind of feel as though the character should have been looking at the other character initially. It is clear the second character is already seated right in front of them. I get that one could be looking away because of frustrated feelings, but maybe it might be more powerful if it started with an intense look at the second character. Then she could quickly turn with that deep breath to suggest that the source of frustration is an incident caused prior to the viewer watching the scene.
45-123: I really like the wide expressive movements and hand gestures. It all feels smooth.
163: I really like the quivering right fist but when the camera angle cuts over at frame 171, the fist is not present in the shot, so it is clear that these two moments are disjointed and happened separately.
202: I like the overt physical expressions but the guy's response is way too over the top and completely doesn't match the voice performance.
Animator: Hector G. Kennedy
Description: Ray just misunderstanding.
Experience: 2 month as intern
Time taken: 6 Day