Richard Clark:

Great Idea!! Great staging! Has that old Buck Rodgers feel to it. Hope this one wins!

Dominic Friedl:

Great work!! Color, animation, story it's all great!
Maybe the start could be adjusted so the Jump would match the noise.
I feel like her move toward the corner should be simpler.
Otherwise, awesome!!

Grace:

I love the ending shot, very nice?

John Adarlo:

What I like about this animation:
- Fantastic Storytelling - I am intrigued about the narrative of why these 2 astronauts are exploring the caves and the 1st astronaut has the eagerness to explore, while the 2nd one is sceptical and afraid.
- Lip syncing is spot on - the articulation of the 1st character's mouth really matches audio clip
- Great job in incorporating the alien-like birds
- Good lighting that adds to the storytelling as the blue hue contrasts to the entrance lighting, which draws my eye.

What I think needs improving:
- Try experimenting with different camera angles and camera movements to show your intention even further. (Whether you want to show the mysteriousness or have the camera in hand held mode).
- At the end you could have the blue astronaut appearing behind the red astronaut to fill in the negative space and you could have both of them watch in disbelief at the thing that is causing the blue lighting.