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intended for strange planet

by DIPANJAN MANNA

Final Rating: 5.38. Finished 61 out of 152 entries.

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Animator: DIPANJAN MANNA

Description: A devil giving advice to the human in front of him

Experience: 1year

Time taken: 5days

Comments:

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Richard Clark:

Decent! The one talking just pretty much stays in one pose with the exception of her left hand. I would break that up into phases that go along with the dialogue. It's good you're not moving the other character too much.

Muhundan Bala:

I think the animation is okay, but the scene feels a bit static and for the lack of a better word, boring.

It would've been cool to have seen more of a story behind this scene rather than a character just reading through her lines word for word. When she asks the other woman if she believes her, it would've been interesting to see some kind of interaction between the two, or some kind of reveal or change within the scene.