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Abandoned Classroom

by Pauleen

Final Rating: 5.67. Finished 53 out of 152 entries.

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Animator: Pauleen

Description: A girl gets scared by a scarecrow in an abandoned classroom.

Experience: beginner

Time taken: 2 weeks

Comments:

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Richard Clark:

Body just stops at certain points. If you want pauses in the movement, make sure it's moving holds.

Ryen de los Santos:

Your hands float a little too much, you can decrease the movement the hands move and your animation will improve drastically. But you also have moments where your character/and their hands are completely still. You cant have that either. One trick I use is to key one frame behind and stretch that placement so its a very subtle hold. It looks still, but is actually moving every so slightly.

Muhundan Bala:

The overall animation could use some polish with some easing in and out.