Comments:
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Richard Clark:
Great lighting and presentation. However, your body mechanics needs improving. The moment between dialogue where she looks into camera. Try to find something to do here instead of just a long stare. Even on "You will" needs some body movement to emphasize the dialogue.
Robyn:
Lighting is rly good
Animator: Max Ebdon
Description: It's getting late in the forest, with the moon shining brightly and the fire roaring, but with Halloween right around the corner, you can't go to bed without a spooky campfire story first.
Experience: 2 Months
Time taken: 2 Weeks