Richard Clark:

Not bad!! Though I feel the female in the back and a little bit of the boy is a bit floaty. And what are those things in the background? Are they supposed to be trees? Is it supposed to be abstract like that? If so, make that clearer.

Muhundan Bala:

Animation feels a bit too stretchy and rubbery (more on the boy). Also feel the background could use something more than just grey shifting backgrounds. The render is nice though.