John Adarlo:

What I like about it:
- Great facial expressions and good character acting (The acting is convincing as it shows the first character trying to convince the second character the existence of aliens, while he is sceptical until she shows him the UFO)
- Amazing Narrative and Storytelling (Great reveal of the UFO)
-The Lighting is cool with an alien glow.

What I think needs improving:
- The lip sync is generally good but some words needs more articulation like 'will' and 'planet', film yourself or another person reading out the dialogue to use as reference to make the lip sync accurate.
- Storytelling (You can have the first character lead the second character to the spaceship because if there was a massive spaceship next to first character, why didn't the second character already see it).