Richard Clark:

Nice set up! However, your piece lacks fundamentals. I would focus on improving on those things instead of your lighting and rendering.

Kiran:

The fire right in front of the face is really unrealistic as when you zoom out it goes down. I’m assuming it was for dramatic effect or to help with the establishing shot. I think another solution may have been to have the camera at a dramatic low angle which potentially could’ve captured the flames but due to the height difference I’m not sure but if u did what u did with the fire in addition to the low camera angle I think it may be an improvement, maybe I’m not too sure tho lol. Really cool tho!!