Amelia Chwesiuk:

slay

Grace:

School is the center of weirdness for many of us both then and now. Nice work

Mateo Pavanel Sander:

Try other poses for hands, especially the pointing hand at the end (look some refrences for this type of pointing to camera). But what is really important is the girl's hands. Looks more like a dinosaur or an old woman. At least for me what works for surprise, fear and excitement emotions is rotating the wrists up, not down.