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by Pablo

Final Rating: 8.41. Finished 2 out of 152 entries.

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Animator: Pablo

Description: Do not enter the mystical realms of the unknown.

Experience: 5 years

Time taken: 10 hours

Comments:

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Richard Clark:

Nice presentation! This might win!

Grace:

I painfully agree lol

John Adarlo:

What I like about this animation:
- The animation is very fluid and overall the lip sync is on point!
- Love the storytelling and the inside joke of the Animation department of a studio to the centre of weirdness of the 'entire planet'. Nice touch of the light flaring up at the end.
- The overall character acting is impressive like the gestures of the character pointing up at the sign.
- Great camera movements and I like the subtle touches of the camera shakes.

What I think needs improving:
- There was a character that was on the sign but climbs out the door frame, it was too quick to identify the character, so have the character hang on the sign before climbing out of the door frame.

Muhundan Bala:

Solid animation!

I think some expression changes could help bump up the piece a little. As of right now, her expressions are a bit same-y. When she says "don't believe me?" have her give a bit of a curious eyes and smile maybe?

Robyn:

that camera grab is really nice