Comments:
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Richard Clark:
Creepy... Even so, you need more fill lights (subtle) to show what's going on. You can't really see much. Also, it appears it lacks fundamentals.
Grace:
I think i understand the intent with the light and shadow, but its too dark
Animator: Aubrey Sharp
Description: Boy scout tells scarry story
Experience: 4 years
Time taken: 1 month