Ryen de los Santos:

If your characters are gothic, I dont think they should be afraid of the crows. Kinda like this quote from Bane "But you merely adopted the dark; I was born in it" your characters are one with the darkness (like wednesday adams). If anything she should be afraid of the brightly colored school.

Your poses are really good but the tweens that need work. The transitions are not that smooth. Great work!

Kiran:

I think her smiling at the end doesn’t make much sense given her earlier expressions and what her appearance makes me think of the kind of person she is. Otherwise really cool!