Comments:
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Adilac:
lipsync not good
Guy Yossef:
The animation you tried to do here is very hard and complicated even for a professional animator, like running a Marathon on your first day. keep it simple and build gradually
Toye Shogbamimu:
The lip-sync is a bit off, but otherwise, great job! Nice camera movements
Antonio Marulevski:
Very creative camera movement








Animator: Luis Torres
Description: He’s training. She’s watching. But things aren’t so simple once the story starts writing itself.
Experience: At least 6 months
Time taken: 1 week