Joshua Eton:

Try not to overcomplicate the animation towards the end. The first shot looked perfect the way it was.

Moses Justin Ginaba:

nice

Richard Clark:

The performance is decent, but I feel like you're not interacting with the car very much that this could have been at a table in the house or anywhere that had a ledge for her to put her arm on. And the end seems like it was tacked on last minute. Not really thought out.