Comments:
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Dante:
I like the body language, although the composition could be better. Also be sure to watch out for some polishes like hiding unnecessary elements. This video has a few helpful tips you can try out:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KvY8hEA2FFU&t=63s
Also watch out for the elbow clipping into the chair at frame 121-122
Joshua Eton:
I feel as if the animation could add or use proper tuning and principles. You should also add better concepts and designs to give out a lively feel.
Moses Justin Ginaba:
Nice
Richard Clark:
Lacks fundamentals. Staging could be better. I would recommend going back to the bouncing ball exercise before jumping into any performance animation.
Animator: Gerard
Description: A dangerous girl who tears out eyes
Experience: 1,5 years
Time taken: 3 weeks