Moses Justin Ginaba:

nice

Richard Clark:

Decent! I like the staging. I just wish you had cut to another shot to reveal something... anything. I like that you have her putting makeup on however the posing of the hands at the end makes sense only when she has her hand over her mouth, then after that it goes to her cheek... why? Is she blending her makeup or something? Are you moving it over so we can see the laughing?