Emilee Phillips:

This is wonderful! I love the acting in the characters. Especially the main character. The arcs in the hands and arms are beautiful! Good work!

Moses Justin Ginaba:

nice

Joshua Eton:

I feel as if the animation could add or use proper tuning and principles. You should also add better concepts and designs to match the tone of the recording because it feels like there isn’t a focus on an actual story here. Also this would easily benefit from better color and texture. Also the amount of in between animations can be improved by using lighter line work.

Richard Clark:

Great piece! Most of this is pretty good. Though I think one choice you made could have been better. When she says "secrets", that's not the pose I was expecting her to do. It looks out of place to me. But maybe I'm the only one who thinks this. Good luck with the win!