Comments:
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Joshua Eton:
This is very close to being great. I’d like to see more color and texture on the background as well as a greater light source. I’d argue the story can be fleshed out more here and there because even at a few seconds, you can always tell a simple but clearer story.
Moses Justin Ginaba:
good
Richard Clark:
Great piece! The acting choice when she says "forget about it" on the main female character is a bit over-the-top and you should consider reducing that motion or come up with something else. The reveal at the end with the kid is funny! Good staging!
Animator: Ronnie Barter
Description: Victoria tries to make sure Mortimer won't share Martha's secret.
Experience: 3 years college 8 months in industry
Time taken: 3 weeks on and off