Muhundan Bala:

Cool design, but the shot lacks movement and character animation.

Dante:

Very nice illustrations. But not only do you avoid having to attempt any lip syncing, but the animation you do have is really simple and stiff.

Moses Justin Ginaba:

Concept needed and give a hint on their secret

Emmy:

I would have liked to see one that focused more on the character speaking. The animation itself is nice though - it has good colors, too!

Richard Clark:

Not sure what you're trying to say here with this. Seems vague and not very interesting.