Christof:

Beautiful

Moses Justin Ginaba:

Flow wasn't bad but yeah, good one

Joshua Eton:

I appreciate the effort to give this a cool art style but conceptually and execution wise, I really want to see more animation principles and life in the designs and motion. I’d recommend looking up realistic references for sure.

Richard Clark:

Great piece! Great staging! Tells a clear story! I love your subtle performance in this! I have one nit-pick on it; the second shot with the main female... her position at the end is in line with the side of the chimney. I would shift either her or the chimney to break it up. This has a good chance of winning!