Joshua Eton:

The camera angles look great but the facial expressions could definitely use more work. I’d recommend looking up character references for the facial structure so the faces don’t look uncanny or off model.

Dante:

The camera cuts and angles feel a little jarring for me. Maybe leave one camera angle on longer before the cut to reveal Martha, and maybe one back. Also not too into the low angle with the direct eye contact into the camera, but I guess that's more of a stylistic choice

Moses Justin Ginaba:

nice

Richard Clark:

Body mechanics needs improvement as well as posing. The movement throughout is floaty. Work on timing. Also, the camera choices could be clearer. She gets up and looks towards camera, then it cuts to a first person but it's confusing because our point of view is not at the table looking at her with your first shot. You should simplify this with the POV sitting at the table before the reveal that she's talking to a stuffed bunny.