Joshua Eton:

I feel as if the animation could add or use proper tuning and principles. You should also add better concepts and designs to give out a lively feel.

Moses Justin Ginaba:

Give a hint of their secret

Richard Clark:

The staging needs work. Especially the shot at the end with the bookcases completely in line with the female's left leg. I would move the bookcases over so that it breaks it up. And the position of the camera needs to be centered on them. There's no reason for the empty space screen left. The male's posing in the first shot needs improvement. It's very squared off. Why is the camera in the first shot positioned this way? It feels very one-dimensional. I can understand you portraying the female character as the dominant character but the posing in this shot needs to be broken up slightly to make it more interesting.