Comments:
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Moses Justin Ginaba:
Secert?
Joshua Eton:
I feel as if the animation could add or use proper tuning and principles. You should also add better concepts and designs to give out a lively feel. Also I would focus on adding more expression on the characters faces.
Richard Clark:
Too floaty throughout. Staging could be better. For you, I would work on the fundamentals. Start with the bouncing ball exercise and work your way up to performances.
Animator: Jenifer
Description: she says that she knows her secret, then opposite person will be shocked.
Experience: 2 years
Time taken: 6 days -- work time, 8 to 9 hours a day