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On the Phone

by Charlie Major

Final Rating: 4.04. Finished 49 out of 73 entries.

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Animator: Charlie Major

Description: Elaine talks to Mortimer on the phone while Martha works on dinner.

Experience: about one year

Time taken: 20 days

Comments:

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Moses Justin Ginaba:

nice

Richard Clark:

Alot of isolated movements and mechanical movements. Lacks weight. I like that you are using props in your scene. Staging could be better. Look at your favorite movies on how they stage scenes and try to replicate that.