Comments:
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Muhundan Bala:
I think the main poses are there but it needs a couple of more passes with the inbetweens so the animation looks less floaty (specially the head) and robotic. Keep at it!
Joshua Eton:
This is a very unique and interesting concept for animation. However I’d argue there needs to be more substance. I’d recommend writing a script, if you weren’t able to improvise on the spot.
Moses Justin Ginaba:
No concept
Richard Clark:
Great idea with the old footage concept. However, your fundamentals need serious work. The acting choices are not very interesting. The staging could be more interesting as well.
Animator: Thomas Zabski
Description: This is the first time I'm using Blender, and I'm also trying a new editing style to fit this audio.
Rig: Max (Blender version)
https://blendswap.com/blend/7081
Wallpaper Texture was made by Gary Killian and taken from freepik.com
Experience: Animated in 3D since late 2010s
Time taken: 1 week modelling, 1 week animating, 1 day editing