Comments:
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Tim Evans:
Good poses though the transitions are too frequent and feel disconnected by the end. I think choosing maybe 2 or 3 key poses to emote the sentences instead of so many. Simplicity would be key here. Good scenario and idea though.
Paul Wei:
Starts out strong but seems like you ran out of time to polish and smooth out the end.
Em Harrenstein:
He is moving around way too much.
Animator: Beiyi Chua
Description: Still learning ~Accept everyone's comments
Experience: student
Time taken: 1week