Comments:
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Chris Ter Berg:
you should add moving holds to make the poses more clear and make your animation 'read' better. Anticipation might help a whole lot too. That said I think the take was extremely difficult as the text implies a slow thoughtfullness that is hard to achieve
Eshan:
too slow..
animation is good but timing needs improvement! good attempt though.
Also, you didnt made use of the 'click-clack' sound, which makes look odd.
Per Cardell:
Animation needs more work. Check out the recourses at 11secondclub! Keept it up!
Em Harrenstein:
You didn't acknowledge the sound effect in the background of the audio.
Animator: Austin Snow
Description: An old man is showing his grandson some out dated tech. The device is his old VCR complete with home movies.
Experience: 3 months - student
Time taken: 3 weeks