Nicole Brettell:

Don't understand what you are getting at... But it's okay I guess.

Ed Seager:

Keep practising, it's getting there. Good ideas, need to work on your mechanics

Kamal Bhattacharjee:

Hi this 11sec voting.. not for ur demoreel display!!!

Ian Alexander Hanson:

Not bad setup, bring camera tighter.

Watch weight, overlap, spine.

Michael Kristiansen:

remember to animate all controllers ie. secondary animations. No one is completely still in some parts of their bodies in that positions.