Comments:
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Nicole Brettell:
I don't mean to be critical, but that reminds me of a cheap cartoon version of "Back to the Future". But I like the expressions and the lip synch.
Ian Alexander Hanson:
Cool drawings and not a bad layout.
Definitely need more body study and watch arcs.
Terressa:
Good start, needs improvements in animation. The feet on Marty slide, lock those down. Not alot of squash and stretch, anticipation or arcs. Also, the staging is too cramped after the walk in, neither character has much room to move and react, move the "camera" back a bit to give the characters room.
Celia Bullwinkel:
Great animation timing. Love this loose, cartoon-y style. Your backgrounds flatten your scene, though. Check your perspective, or try using more reference.
Javier Ovalle:
I like this, it has good expression and body language, not much to say.
Animator: James
Description: This is pretty much the first thing I thought of when I heard the audio, I didn't put a story to it or anything, I animated it as an out of context scene.
The backgrounds I don't really like, I just kinda rushed through them.
Experience: 6 years
Time taken: 3 weeks