William Barry Eggington:

very smooth blending.

Remi Thewissen:

Feels natural, good work

Elizabeth:

The mechanics look pretty good!

Ian Alexander Hanson:

I like his first few motions, feels very naive and teenagery. So good work there. His getting up is a bit weak in that his whole body is going upward at once, whereas the head/chest really should be moving down while butt/hips go upward. Some of his moving hold motions are a bit overdone and distracting.

Some really good things going there!

Gabriel:

Could be snappier

San Mathew:

Nice action. Needs more exaggeration

Terressa:

Very nice! Excellent organic movements, very smooth and believable. Lip sync and facial expressions very strong. His left hand needs to go somewhere however, it just kind of hovers around the tank but never finds a home if you will. I would have him touch the tank or pack with his index finger and add a bit more action to that hand during his reach out. I would also pull the camera back a bit more, his hair gets cropped and feels cramped.