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by Peyman Bodaghi, September Competition Winner!
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Love the idea, love the acting, love everything ! Fantastic job !
expet having him running front of cam u culd make a better cut and sell the gag better at the end :) lipcsyn is off a bit plus jump from bike is not so strong like his reaction on the bike:)
Nice facial animation :)
Nice! But you have to control the intensity of lip-sync according to the voice modulation...
Great ! like the timing
Ian Alexander Hanson:
Cool concept and decent execution! Like the riding on the horse and how it loses energy.
Movements erratic, watch arcs, watch weighting. End shot should be more 3/4.
Fantastic animation! Very inspiring....I'm so jealous :(
Very well done. Lots of squash and stretch, anticipation, arcing motions, the jumps both look fantastic. The only thing I think could be done is to push the squash pose a bit more forward before the leap up onto the scooter, other than that this is wonderful!
Great animation and rendering. Watch the audio distortion, though.
Nicolás Rafael Suazo Monsalve:
Good! Really good poses and awesome flow.
There is a little cut on camera a little bit weird and I would like some more expresive or exagerated poses, other than that feels great.
Adorable characters, strong lip sync and acting choices. The animation is very strong, especially the walking. The motion blur needs tweaking, as an aside, but overall, a very enjoyable piece!
Good Job !
awesome work !
Maybe it would have recquired some extra stretchs on the eyes and mouth, particulary with that kind of cartoony design.
some of the key poses should have be a lot more silhouette.
anyway that rocks !!!
Animator: Peyman Bodaghi
Description: Please eCritique My Animate. Thank You.
Experience: 6 Years
Time taken: 2 Week part Time