Comments:
(Commenting only available during the rating period)
Jordan Lewers:
Whatever it was that fell on the ground (balloon maybe?) distracted me from the acting
Çağtay Kubilay Güraras:
I think you should focus on the movement before the lipsync. Keep working!
Hanne Dewachter:
Well, I think you can draw, but for an animation to be an animation you need more than a drawn still image with a moving mouth on it.. I'd love to see some gestures in there.
Byron Pockrandt:
Nice lip sync. I would like to see more poses. I would also like to see more happiness instead of robotic look on the last pose where she says, "Exciting".
John Sloan:
The mouth seems to be floating. The characters arnt moving at all.
Animator: Ellora
Description: This is my finished animation for this months competition, that I am doing for my Animation course at college.
Experience: 1 1/2 years animating student
Time taken: 1 week